V/ Top.

Better wording. Concepts overall were nicer.
Intense you lacked in punctuation. And it really
threw off ya verse. Think harder about what
ya sayin, and try not to come so simple. Think
of fresh concepts. Rather then tryin to word
an old concept dope.

Best Bar of the battle

Break bones wit fists? na he's gay for sure,..n i'll leave this dope rapp poutin'
n ur rite, everytime we c ya punches we think of Broke Backs'.........mountain

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