Lay-Your concepts are there somewhat. But both of your bars
were forced. Your tryin to put to much shit in them, and its
throwin it off. Think more before you post it.

Aphilly-your first bar was ok. Not bad, wording could have been
a bit better. 2nd one was too cocky and not that good. almost
lost it for you...

v/aphilly

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