lol wow.. this sounds like how when i first started rappin usin Windows voice recorder...
get cool edit pro or somehtin man... lol
the beat.. ehh i hear it way too much...
for a freestyle its sounds pretty koo but when ya switch up sounds like u memorized some shit or somethin cuz if u freestylin that quick than ddamn step ya game up quick cuz u could make 100's of tracks lol..
eh this was pretty bad overall... lol sorry kid kno u in the krew just sayin my thoughts on it... p'z

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