da hook is annoyin even for a club track........

Verse one - needs to up da quality......up ya vocal volume.....da delivery is strate.....flow is on....lyrics is strate for this type of track...

Verse two -the way this MC delivered "enormous" wuz wack.....ya draggin out too many words....just add more syllables.

Verse three- better flow.....ya delivery is strate too......"pukin in a buckett" shit i noe how ya feel..lol.......up da quality...

Overall - all MCs sounded like they were five feet away from the mic......there wuz too much echo......but it wuz strate club track....keep droppen...

pz

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