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Old 05-27-07, 09:04 AM   #94
chip
pain is weakness leaving the body
 
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just raw, read odd lines slower...

ransum again, make-up check, fix ur face clown
and he homo, his make-up swim; don't talk with your mouth full, keep ur face down
but onto a better topic, man i'm fly
i could sleep on my stomach, have a wet dream and nut in a bird's eye
Mary-Jane i used to love her, now i love h.e.r.
and write h.e.r. everyday like a whipped young brotha
now she my only vice, i even quit the niccotine
fully focused, Freddy couldn't kill a nigga's dreams
and even tho i get silly sometimes like the first 4 lines
in the Lord i find that comfort when i'm sleepin with lions
so it's kool to be kool, but it's hot when you're not
so to you i'm on fire, now let me see what you got...

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