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Old 05-29-07, 11:29 PM   #4
Jay Rose
I don't lose
 
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Tha .Q
What's hot:

Beat
Both flows


What needs work:

Verse lyrics could be more creative...needs more quotables


Overall:

Good track...and I DID remember the hook


nice one fellas


bangin



i know you do, cuz it was from my track way back....word up, flowed w. it well, personally think my version was a bit better...
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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