haha we need a new mod here even though im new to RV i still can work shit....atleast I think....well whatever.

This poem was a preety weird peice and hard to understand at some points like first off in the begin check this pattern Ill break down the bars

.....another creation of my remains
a sibling of strength
the scorching blood through their veins
"Whos Vens"
sharing personality with thought's
iv came and gone
lived high, but yet to conquer all
"confusing but ok"
the end promises the rebirth
in which ill redirect myself to earth
"Nah didnt like that part and then it ended"

Like that Its hard to conplait it together but it seemed like it could become a very nice peice

good work keep at it though