Yo I told you what i thought about this song. I think you improved you're flow and delivery a hell of alot since the last time I peeped you. You're fluctuating you're voice giving that emotion element. They're the good points, weak points flow sumtimes was off but for a freeverse jawn it doesn't matter and lyrics I told you I jus do not feel some choice of words you use. Hit me back

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