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Old 06-02-07, 02:58 AM   #11
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Hook: The Idea is right but it's not catchy enough to me nah mean. But it's close to that.

Verses: The multis are pretty nice, delivery is good, def we can believe ure ready..flow is regular kontro shittt

Beat is pretty nuts

Not much to improve jus make hook catchier, perhaps by more standout adlibs and a lil more swav on the hook nah mean.

This was clean tho..8/10
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