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Old 06-02-07, 11:01 PM   #13
M&rk
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splittin the wordplay up in ya first bar ruined it there jason.
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show ya first line is just played, second isn't played cuz its a fuckin nameplay and this dude is new so fuck everyone. that was decent, and penis jokes aint wack, the allowed always wit a good flip.

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last line by jason... what the fuck? your style of wordplay makes no sense to me, your makin it too hard and confusin. but i doubt it makes sense with out a real good explination, so that alone makes it wack.

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