Damn it's been a while kidd, let me see what I can get out of this piece...
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Howdy, For Sale Is This Distorted Picture On A Broken Family Tip
Priceless Is Tha Frame, Tapped Together During A Moka Sanity Trip
Tha Land Is Clean, But Contaminated Through These Diseased Pigeons
That Leave High Lines An Edifice And Behold Tha Whole Fiend Image
Motivate You G's With 24 Karrats On A Rod And Tame With A Stick
Tha CIA Is On My Case And Using Snare Efforts With Basic Tactics
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Once again your vocab and flow coincided nicely here, I miss reading your pieces with that structure to it, nice lines kidd, intro was nice and smooth, the piece flowed well to it,
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Tha Omen Of Evolution, Life's Aim Is To Excell Constant Confusion
Thank God I Found Myself Again, I Think It Was Lost In Tha Music
Crusade Through Arks, And Abolish These Doleful Geometric Shapes
Like 3 Dimensional Triangles And Lost Cities Beneath Pectic Lakes
Pessimistic Views On Heaven Are Found Proof After Great Excavations
Evidence Is Evident And May I Quote "Its All Sake's Explaination"
A Motive For Being Fabricated Wasn't Present, Fate Is Tha Truth
As You Interupt, My Mind State Is Mi-nute, Caught Breaking Tha Muse
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Nice internals displayed here kidd, the imagery was nicely done too, I cannot find any real problem in this piece, overall you had most of the piece on point, I cannot really break it down like I wanted to cause I am tired as hell, but just giving you a heads up and this post was laggin behind...
love...