was okay, nothing special...imagery was iffy...there was some there man...just missed it by a little..i pictured leaves brustling in the wind..and felt like i was the wind...idk y..thats just wat was painted for me...it flowed nicely..and all that, im not a fan of the 2 word lines..but oh well lol...you followed the concept ok, nothing to creative or outstanding..but u followed the topic nonethe less

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A LIFE OF CHRYME