with a name like technique i'd expect there to be far ess mispelled words, step up ur vocab... this is also one of those pieces that are quicly becoming my biggest pet peeve... don't be deep for the sake of being deep, just say what u wanna say, and if it comes that way, so be it... okay conept, but played, try to come more specific and w/ better voc. next time, i have faith in u, keep writing...

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