u got some good metaphores in this verse, had a nice flow 2 it aswell man, i was feelin the second verse more, cus it wasnt like 2 bars then 2 bars, it felt like 1 big line which jus kept goin and goin, it was a good read and u outdone urself here man, check out my drop called fameass

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Im just startin to get in the Swing of usin Keys for a bar
& how ironic im throwin them same keys in your mommas Jar!