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Old 03-13-03, 07:57 AM   #2
unifire
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that was some tight shit.. only thing is like kinda edit the structure like..
straight from down under its the sound of thunder the one who'll never blunder cast foes asunder for a pound
goes the full ten rounds
make it like...
straight from down under its the sound of thunder/
the one who'll never blunder/
cast foes asunder for a pound/
goes the full ten rounds/.. u know wat i mean..
still nice rhymes .. keep that shit up
peace out...
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