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Old 06-18-07, 06:45 PM   #5
Paranoid
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alright listenin as I type. the beat seems hot, I hope you made it lol. I'm not really feelin how the hook sounds so robotic lol it could sound more gurly you know. Anyway your verse is pretty good. Flow is pretty smooth you ridin the beat good. I'm feelin the adlibs you got. The mixing jea I wish i mixed that well. The lyrics is hot I like some of those lines def quotables lol. Anyway pretty hot track.

rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=242923
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