I'm Talented.Period.
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IP:
RTF please on my new spoken word joint...
What's hot:
1 Beat...pretty slick
2 Rhyming is pretty decent
What needs work:
1 Some adlibs throughout the 2nd run of the hook
2 vocals sound unusual...muffled a bit...u entered the beat oddly, IMO
3...Flow is decent at best here...but erratic/disjointed sounding
Overall:
Had potential...but lacked polish
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