Hmm..voice sounds very interesting. Like a mix between John Legend and Jason Mraz. Something like that. Piano sounds pretty simple..nothing wrong with that. Sounds like he strains a few times which at times can be good..times like this. Mixing on the drums pretty much sucks. The symbols are way too harsh. Lyrics are pretty odd...now that I understand the song, it's not so bad. The melody of his singing on the verses gets boring after a while. On the last chorus they should have kept the energy up instead of going up and then down and then up. I like the transition into the last part..bridge? There's too much of a rollercoaster in this song. Your part kinda comes out of nowhere so it's a bit strange. I honestly don't think that it fit very well in the song. Your verse alone was pretty cool. Very short so it's hard for me to say that I really liked it or not. Flow was simple..it worked with the music. If this was an instrumental that would be cool. So talk to them and tell them to record an instrumental so I can hop on it too. Not bad. Kinda like this song..it grows on you after a while. Good job.

Good to see people branching off and trying something different.