New to RV
|
IP:
Meh, you need a little bit of elevation, but basically it was ok. You need better vocab, and emotion, but i see how your writing, it was pretty cool in my mind..Others may not have liked it, but i kinda enjoyed it, not very poeticly, but a type of song thaty ou would do in audio, but written out..Ok job man
__________________
God.Status
1X RBFL Topical Champ.
1X RA Middle-Weight ABL Champ, I'm Bezerk
|