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Old 06-27-07, 09:31 AM   #2
Jay Rose
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first i noticed your too lound and not mixed into the beat enough your on top of it.....i can still tell your reading a bit, your not sayin it like you feel it, your sayin it like your suposed to.....the hook was mixed real week, n i dont like it that much....its like meh....the beat is a lil poppy for a song with this subject....its ight...couldnt listen to it more then once tho....get ya quality up a lil, n learn to say things like you mean em....

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dad said, son you're fucking high
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so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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