http://community.rapverse.com/showt...776#post3173776


^^^^^^^^^ lol yeah why not post it in the open mic section along with your other posts....just throwing it out there cough.....

i like your wordplay and multis some vocab too....structure was a little off.... and your punches didn't come strong.....for an off the top this is good but for a diss punches were lacking....keep writing though ~1~....