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damn..
..that kind of hit hard (and deep)...it being about but i'll still try to make some short techincal comments on it...
...it had a kind of effortless flow, which stop-started to good effect...well not so much stop start, but one which at times slowed down, to good effect..
...vocab used complemented the subject, and the piece overall well...not overly complicated, but also not too simplistic that it'd to an injustice to the subject...enabled the reader to really get into the piece...
...okay, so once or twice it did seem to go off a bit, but i can't really put my finger on what it was exactly...
....respect...
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