Raw...and full of emotions...

...once more, it had a lot of personal depth to it...i felt the whole 'theme' of this piece....vocab was used to good effect, if not at times hindered by lack of structure...

...what i mean by that is the basic structure...the way you place your lines makes it hard to read, and disrupts the flow for the reader...i think it's also the style of writing it is...but mainly just the way it is layed out....

...all in all, was still a very good piece, which i quite liked..but a bit hard to read and getting a good flow to...

...respect...

PS

You were once Contenflo, weren't you? Personally think that sounds better, and is more subtle giving it a strong meaning, than Content Flowz, just a personal opinion though....