I listened again.
But I didn't read the synopsis.
Still sounds like you're a gay bitch.
If you ever rap that in front of a crowd you'd better INCLUDE the meaning after your song. I immediately assumed you were talking about your life. It's not my fault I don't look around your page more than just clicking Hi-fi.
All you say is "I'm..."
And as you go through your song talking about all this shit happening to a person which is yourself... you include your fucking name. Like it's gonna make me think of a Man, Woman, or Child...
You might think you're being sophisticated but all you're really doing is making me dislike the whole concept of it, you can stick to your group of "Sophisticated people" But in the REAL world no one is gonna pay anymore attention to it than another song in their 300-500 song Ipod.
But that's if it actually sounded good on an un-exquisitely sound piece of equipment.
Just take a suggestion, and either make your music out to "Nobody, It's Just A Hobby" or "Anyone who cares". That way I could understand you a little better as a rapper.
