Yo.....

Beats real nice. Not the shit you're used to hearing, you know? Your flow seems all over the place man. Maybe its the beat thats hard to keep up with but I'm really havin a hard time keepin up with your flow man. That hook's gotta go too man. Its not all bad though man.....your delivery makes you sound like you've been doing this for a while even though your flow says otherwise. You got some good confidence and you need to keep that man. I'd work on the rest of the shit though man...

....keep droppin em man

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