Voted For: Lay Fear

K-M -nice word play, but inconsistant line length... gay jokes get played out, unless those are personals i'm not getting... nice vocab, but some used int the wrong context... eye optics... anything optical has to do w/ the eye...

Lay Fear- if i've ever had a pet peeve it's spelling... wow... i've never seen anyone miss i've before... decent punches, and tho i don't like how the dots ..... are used to seperate bars, it was useful in establishing planned breaks in ur flow, so i ddn't hold that against you... better punches overall next time leave ut the lmao...

decent battle...

V/ lay fear

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