pain is weakness leaving the body
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Voted For: Ransum
Artik Phrost- i am a fan of your wordplay, even tho it seems you rushed this a little... one major flaw in your flow tho, is that when you battle, you focus more on being clever than coming up w/ clear punches.... most of these were kind of bla... try something more personal... the way this guy spells should make him an easy target...
Ransum- sometimes i hate you... lol, seriously, you are the worst speller i've ever seen, idk if it's cuz you're typing fast or what, but damn! better punches minus the one you had to explain, but i almost gave it to Artik cuz your shit is so hard to read, spell check or something man... you get the win purely going blow for blow...
V/ Ransum
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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..."
-Konchance
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