Listenin'..

I think this song is pretty clever, alot of the lyrics you put through this song was intelligent. I think, breath control needs to be worked on for you're shit and flow is decent, I guess that works but some times you're packing too much in there. But this song would be pretty hot as an interlude, def reminds me of some underground NY artists on that kinna mosdef tip. Im growing warmer on this, this is a nice song, not my swag but I acknowledge it so word holla back at me:

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