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Old 07-19-07, 12:09 PM   #3
Jay Rose
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your quality seems more hallow....it sounds like your annunciation of words is worse then it used to be.....alot more needs be done to this track....your hook needs to be layerd more, this is a track when you actually need those adlibs that u usually over do, i just feel your quality did a nose dive....structure n all is straight up, but this just sounds like a lame version of cassidy tho.....put a lil more time into making the song better...cuz its good rhymes n what not but as a song put together it doesnt do much for me
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three sad semesters
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