ok ok concept overall was deep..... good visual here...... the cuttin and drippin had a lil effect.... made me bite my lip a lil like ouch

structure was decent, flow stretched but i took it as a poem instead to get rid of the flow ish ....... couple fo metas in there, simple.... somewhat , for the most part everything was put together, pretty sad story esp since its true, if theres anyone that knows about loss its u and i feel u since ive been there.......keep doin u man.... good piece..... ill rate it as a poem and give it a thumbs up man....