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Old 07-21-07, 12:49 PM   #23
JWILD
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This was feedback posted for Ransum

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I can't vote yet... but I am sayin Ransum gets my vote.
here the break down, as usual there are a few more important aspects of the battle for me. I felt in this one they were...in order of importance (most important, to this battle, first):
Multis: DEF Ransum...I think that's mostly where he killed his rhyme. He won in #, ease of understanding/delivery.
Punchlines: slight edge to Ransum...though Artik had more build up, Ransum's were easier to get minus the 6t explanation (my own ignorance played part in that)
Close: Both were good but Artik got it. The explanation of "dorm it" was called for, cause when one reads it, you don't always hear what you would in an audio battle.
Open: Ransum. Artik: "HE'S gettin chewed" then "YA finished dude"? in the same line this don't work for me. My personal pref is for consistencey (e.g. "ur and ur"), maybe personalize both by adressing the competition.

I thought metas and personals were equal.

win: Ransum

Unfortunantly this aint a vote...but check my battle (soon to be battles) out...u know what to do.
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