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Old 07-28-07, 04:59 PM   #11
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Voted For: sin-scere

Yo,
My flow bites harder then u niggas wit slice/
Niggas like sin-scere like to cry all night bought dice/
the 1st line makes no fucking sense... 2ed is weak...

hatin on niggas cuz he lose,
i dont talk to niggas like him i got juice/
^^ weak...
next time u make a scene about ur own rap screen/
shut the fuck up cuz u got beat by clova a.k.a green,
oook...but that personal is weak cuz clova is 4-0... it would of been a good personal IF CLOVA WAS 1-4.. see what im saying now?? gotta learn how to use personal cuz some of them can backfire like this one....

like a four leaf nigga its time to beam ur new color is green when i hit u in ur spleen/
makes no sense... weak...
like green beans and peas, ur a mini me,
tech nines pop off, and u jus met a g/
1st line make no sense, 2ed ok

im gunna take ur head and tear it to shreads/
like i do to ur whole hood lay them to bed/
best bar u have.. striaht to the point.. but get more creative...

hell yah thats wat i said cuz ur luck has ran out,
i laughed when u p.m.ed me callin me out,
eeeh
shut ur mouth u text records south,
u would cum at a newbie shut ur mutha fuckin mouth,
WEAK...

i hope u came wit flames and i hope i lose,
so u can get ur pride bak, and learn how to juke/
nah...
u would think u would go after sumone on ur level,
jus cuz i sizzle niggas evryone no's im better/
nah....

you need a lot of work still man....

all around 3 outta 10

I kno everyone kno's besides mi
dat he just joinin da wagon callin himself Lil-E''
eeh...

Obviously u cant defeat mi
2 elevate change ur name 2 ''Big-E''
nah.. not really hitting...

u heard him he say his name iz Lil-E
I think we should call him ''Lil-Ecstasy''
nah man... you need to word this bar out better it could of been decent...

Because thats all he's been n all he was
people listen 2 ur shyt 2 git a ''Lil-Buzz''
aight... straight to the point flow smooth..

im riddin on ur name just because
i dont hav a answer y but i just like 2 judge
WTF?? its a battle... this is a FILLER...

i think he done it cuz there's already a eazye n lileazyE
so he a lil more little so he tok of eazy n end up wit lil-e
you tryed some WORDPLAY.. which is cool keep trying those they help...

but im a done diss chump like aids
diss aint fukin cheeker's but nigga checkmate
WTF??

dont write nun bac 4 ur sake
cuz i took every last bit your pride wen i spit in ur face
aight... but still lacking effect on the hit..

a couple more bars will divour u
not even a couple u aint worthy so im a buss 1 or 2
aight...

we all kno wat he'll do,he say oh sin aint gone hurt mi cuz wi in da same crew
naw fuker dat aint tru
i aint a nazi but i'll extrminate u like a fukin jew
kinda streched but best bar in this battle...

u suk many dik's but he'll say a few
onli time dis bitch spit sik is wen he caught dah flu
ok ending....

all around... 5.5 outta 10

ya need to keep elevating man and stay focus with who you are dissing and how...