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Old 07-28-07, 11:17 PM   #8
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Voted For: High Knucks

phenom1
Quit Messin In Fights!! Phenom 'Check Ya Insides' Like Inspections At Flights
I Know How To Form Punchlines While He 'Left In The Dark' Like Directions At Night/*
That was pretty weak.
Dethrone The King? You Feeling Lucky? I Get To Ripping And Smash You Clovers
Cuz He Stop When 'Shit Hits The Fan' Like I Was Flipping A Bathroom Over/** (HaHa)
Not bad.
Phenom Be Ruling And Stunt Ur Growth. I Crush Fakes So I Get To Ruining You Bummer Clones.
My Skills Is Shown, And Its Best If Dude 'Keep At Bay' Like Moning To Summer Homes/***
Nah.
This Is Like Words In A Undercover Sting Gone Wrong Cuz You In Trouble You Fake
First Time He Too Out Witted To Match This So Like 'Greedy Thieves' He'll Do A Double Take/ ****
Not feeling this.
Knucks, Keep On Wishin G! Cuz Like 'Dated Love Letters' Your Punches Are Fading And Missing-Me
You Better Then P? Thats Where I 'Draw The Line' Like Painting A Fishing Scene/ *****
Whack.
Outweigh Me? I Test His 'Bone Strength' So Its Not 'Marijuana' When He Watch Me 'Try A Joint'
This Dudes 'Irrelevant To Skill' And I Kill Without 'Laying A Finger' On Him And He'll Be Desides The Point/******
No.

Pretty whack verse, nothing to special stood out at all, was actually a pretty difficult read. Work on your structure, a bit on flow, and don't explain everything. If a punch is good it won't need an explanation. Good attempt, keep elevating and dropping.


High Knucks
take a page outta your sex life dude, you're nothing much
for real, how many battles before you prove you fuckin suck
Not bad.
you'll need alot of luck, i'm about ready to burst
grab a 4 leaf Clova... but that guys even worse
Lmfao.
i'll slap ya around, like when you're in your room
you have so much whack shit dude, you could get high off the fumes
Ehh..
nah i'm not serious, i'm messing around, having a beer
i get straight to the point, phenom's just queer
Easy, but made me laugh.
i'll tear you apart, more of monster than that wall in boston
and i'll break ya down faster than pychaiatrist with a shotgun
PUMP PUMP
Word.
you're no good, your shit just doesn't fly at this board
you couldn't land a decent punch, in a brawl at the airport
I dig it.

Not bad, can tell it's been a while since you've battled. Still got some magic, flow was dope, some punches were pretty funny. You got this easy.

Vote: High Knucks



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