what up man, haven't been here in a while...
This is the first thing I'm checking out and it looks pretty hot, vocab was nice, and the flow was nice n smooth here... maybe it's because I'm kinda sleepy ovah here, but some of this didn't make sence to me... I mean it probably does make sence to you, cause i know you wouldn't write something that didn't mean anything... but I find it somewhat complex... it's like I have to analyze it to get all of it... lol... guess I'm in the mood for something simple...
Much props to you man, rhymes and wordplay was tight...

Peace