This was feedback posted for phenom1
IP:
open: Phenom- I felt the first line
close: Definantly Phenom1...High Knucks it seemed like you were searching for something to rhyme with "this board" and came up with "airport"...I realize though that this is in keeping with the airport/directions theme from Phenom's first 2 lines. Still a little weak...
personals: tie
metas: Phenom
punches: High Knucks..."you have so much whack shit dude, you could get high off the fumes" I felt that
multis: Tie
close one...but
Win: phenom
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