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Old 07-30-07, 05:41 PM   #23
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high knucks had virtually 0 punchlines asside from his last line. He had No personals whatsoever. The flow was shitty, there were no multies...and look at the difference between the length in the lines! Syllable count is what makes flow...and you can see that high knucks has no concept of syllable count.




your first line didn't even make sense.

how many battles before you prove you fuckin suck? It only takes 1....if you've battled multiple times..and havn't proved you suck...it's probably because you don't suck....that applies to everything.



Basically, phenom beat you in ever aspect of battling. By a lot. Not because his verse was incredible, but because yours was incredibly bad...


to make it simple. This was a battle, where only one person battled the way they are supposed to.

1 person had consistant punchlines..the other had 1. and it sucked.

1 person had decent flow. The other person had shitty flow.

Nobody used personals.

1 person had decent metaphors..the other had none.


it's no contest here, i really believe that anyone who votes towards you high knucks, should be banned for being stupid, or dick riding.
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