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Old 07-31-07, 04:40 PM   #7
Jay Rose
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good ole PT skills like a rollercoaster.....you on the come up then back down.....

example - the first verse flow/lyrics on point....like woah on point.....emotion delivery, kinda monotonous....n in the hook you start to pick it up....work on ya influctions in ya voice.....it will make your real lyrics seem real for your life.....thats the only advice i can give on this.....potential on this one....its on the way dont let it slip back down
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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