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Old 08-05-07, 01:11 PM   #4
Diet Coke
 
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Buryin' Emcees? Shit kid, I think you're having trouble.
Fly's verses so weak don't even think they could lift the shovel.
Here's what'll I'll do, give you some pointers in your behalf,
Let's start with your structure... what the fucks with the paragraph?
You're fuckin' whack kid, I think you're in the wrong PLACE,
Fly's rhymes don't get noticed... so he types them out in UPPER CASE.
Kid's a fake, but he'll get votes that we don't understand...
Wait a sec, isn't that how your "Clova" alias got banned?
Fuck Bull, I'm The Red Baron for this fight,
'Cause I'm taking out this Fly-er before he even starts his flight.