pain is weakness leaving the body
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Voted For: Red Bull
v/ Red Bull... no hate Fly, i even ignored ur obvious structure problems, it's just obvious this was bitten... Fly you had NO PERSONALS and red's whole verse was full of personals with bars you can read... srry, Red Bull gets this easy...
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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..."
-Konchance
my poetry:
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