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Old 08-08-07, 09:45 PM   #5
Thelivingsped
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CEHEAYH DAGWS TIS SHYT WIS HAWT TWO TRAWT!

It was pretty good, I liked it, but a few tips, even though you are better then me, I can still provide them.

Don't use paragraph form when you are doing text, it makes it hard to read.

While overall it was good, the flow went well, parts just didn't seem to work for me. Like if one line ends with 'her' don't make the next line end with'her'. normally it doesn't work that well, but sometimes you can pull it off.

Good work
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