all right im back.....my bad for sleepin fams....

overall i can tell u tryin something different which is good.....it has potential though.....u got good lines in it and the concept is there....but got off subject on some parts....

Rememba Tha Name, I Leave U Wit 1 Question...Who U Kno Betta Than F@M3...

^^^^^ ahh i thought that line could of been left out and the line before this one should of been the ending it sounded better that way to me.....

keep writing though fam i like to see different post like this instead of just always punchlines all the time.....~1~

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