this not a DISS to anyone so i would like some "real feedback" so i know where to improve.....i type this shit up a couple of months ago...i was tryin something new....so sorry if it seems "stretched" cause at the time i was workin on my structure...if u "read it right" though u should be able to understand it....~1~


in a killers mind evil thoughts rain fury.......people die in the lane then buryed
screaming lives put away slowly.......searchin for evidence by the police
the lands cursed from a death feast un holy......bloody terrain left many dead only
like they fell from a plague rolling.......
crushed organs put in black bags.........melted skin on bones cracked and dragged
faces burnt to a crisp grilled........broken hearts get quick chills
when they see there murdered love ones.......criminal cant be caught above guns
with morbid thoughts of anger.......went out and bought a razor
to cut into skins like saws........a deadly sin destined for falls
fingers put in jars along with limbs and arms........situations vivid for harm inside the mist of a farm
the smell of carcus in the air........and hell is started for many scared
investigators search threw stench.......and hold there breaths cause theres no vent
sick minded indivdual on the loose from laws.......every trace found the troops are called
but the killers always one step ahead........mastering the puzzle seeming as a veteren
shoe prints found but dont match this guy.......will detectives ever snatch this guy
this is like a horror film.......the beast comes to harden hearts till
the armogeddon reaches surface.......starvin children and women see hearts less
a destruction in the way of man.......from the fires paving the day of lands
ends on the earths last days........war on brink sending drastic waves
of more deaths consuming natures beauty.......the new life to be in fear of loosing
your precious family along with friends......cause the killers reign longs to never end
but defeat shall surely come soon.......to this immitated devil who runs doom
smart villians eventually die to there graves.......even after years of hunting live prey



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