Voted For: Ransum


decent idea, but worded horribly...regardless of it's meaning...B.E.S.T is an acronym and people will read it as such....so in reality...your trying to rhyme...the letter T....with konsept....i know that wasn't your intention..but that's what it is.

second bar is sort of played out....i don't know many times i've seen someome..including myself when im lazy...say shit like...only time you above me when you post first...or something like that....signature is a spin i havn't seen..but it isn't enough spin to distract from the played concept.

3rd bar was ok, just wodered wrong again..

it would have been better if it was like...
koncept below average, no way he's BEST when he can't battle at all...
bitch gets kicked around more than dave becham passin the ball..


that's still not dope by my standards..but it's significantly better....it's saying the same thing...but the wording is just better..

next bar, pretty decent...my favorite so far....a little played..wording is bad once again...but the concept is decent atleast....wording will come with time......next line is kinda cool...definately original...good overall punch...a smurf wearing sweats isn't exactly a great portrayal of being short on heat....but it's decent...and it fits with the multie...so fuck it...decent line..

closer....shit was hot...only problem is....did he say he was a cannibal? if not than you are assuming....and thats not good...personals win battles..what would make it better...is if you said..
.so if you plan to diss ransum, plan to do it right..
better yet, act a cannibal, detatch the hands you use to write..


overall....not a good verse...the ideas alone would make it an average verse...but the wording kept that from happening..the best punch you had was by far your last one...your showing signs of talent...good work....stay up man..


konsept...the only line you had that Im even going to allow myself to mention...is the crossin the finish line..that was pretty fucking good name/wordplay....only thing is..your set up line was kinda pointless...it didn't add much to the punch itself...either way.....if you can extract all this whackness from your verses..and transform every bar into a bar equal to the caliber of the one you had...you might be a force to be reckoned with.



ransum wins this battle..easy...konsept showed potential..but failed to reach the level needed to outshine his competitor.

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