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Old 08-15-07, 11:00 AM   #14
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ok for one this battle was too long way too long fame you used alotta multis but you really wasn't punchin in them very hard but the ones that landed were pretty good the flow was cool overall if your verse was shorter it would've prolly hit harder but it still wasn't bad you just mad long-winded

and fly you had a long ass rhyme as well which took away from it alot and how many god damn times where you gonna use dick ryder i could see if you kept flippin it and playin off of it but you were just sayin yo you a dick ryder cmon fella no homo
but in the end it came down to the better structure and better over all punches, and i laughed at that last line i hope you didn't use another dude rhyme and keep his name in it lmao! that aint right, but thats neither here nor there i didn't judge off that but it was funny

my vote goes to fame for better punches flow and structure
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