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Old 08-18-07, 03:35 PM   #7
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This was feedback posted for K-M

IP:

deathblows...
ya flow was decent...
but ya punches was lacking... it wasnt hitting hard nor was it well created... it was more simple then complex and didnt make me say ouu or nice.. i just was like ooh ok and?...
keep practising u'll get better just focus more when u write...
this is a battle not a cypher so u gotta say things that'll make people say DANM that was hot... cuz i basicly already knew what u was gonna say before i read it... it was more like uw as just flowing thats all..

keep trying..

ha you won this one hands down...

flow smooth..
punches was decent but i've seen better... but not bad..
creativeness was decent..

im guess'in u knew ua int need to come hard for this guy so u just put together someshit and didnt waste to much time on it...

300 J.G we running this rap shit...