Thread: I Am God
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Old 08-19-07, 05:54 AM   #25
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deep....

flow was good and consitent, easy to catch but in a piece which requires alot of thought it wouldnt matter cuz after evry line ud have to think of its relation to the overall topic anyway

vocab was great and the usage applied was on point......


my past haunts my beginning, and the rest of me..
my past fucked my present, and gave birth to my destiny..
the evil once manifested, i request it to rest in peace..
obsessed hatred began attested, now i'm pressed to weep..
a tear sheds for every predicate dressed in weaponry..
broken hearts and jaws, fists and tongues posessed with me..
(i get all of this here......and its tight how u know how the way God really feels when shyt goes down, u expressed his emotions thru words.......as if they were ur own, deep.....i like the last line cuz ur basically sayin that people say his name in vain...nice)
every language is vital to my existance, I strike a chord..
Emotions expressed, no one ever heard this type before..
(lmao def feelin)

I'm all powerfull, but I can't seem to try and stipulate..
rules where you can't manipulate to avoid all the shit you hate..
(soooo true)

I shine light on a situation, and i've rained on your parade..
Flash Floods of baths of blood because i'm chained to your decay..
(illness......good thought, u must of been high thinkin of this part cuz its true)

and Lust can look like love if you wrap your words right..
(heh amen)

Use my ability to boast of your petty accomplishments..
you still envy, compared to him, you really havn't accomplished shit..
(good example relatin to the definition of envy and the result)

Wars and death become of me, the son of man's the son of me..
(hehe i like this one too)

The power of words, is also known to me as, the Power of God..
(as this is the summary.......it basically a message to all those spittin.....that words expressed are words from God.....and man in a way should be careful at times on how the use it.....its like a delegation of authority in a sense.....*shrugs* means alot to the point where its scary but in the end ur sayin ur God in summary due to this last line......and hell thats all u really needed, the rest supported it)
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