Thread: GHO$T vs K-M
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Old 08-20-07, 11:00 AM   #11
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"posted" up like a sticky note, makin more "dough" than a bakery
only "grinding" you do is that noise wit ur teeth, cuz u hatin on me
aight start...

i pack big guns, "blastin" off more rockets than NASA
havin the next nigga to see him be the cops, his mama and the pastor
nah...

hittin more licks than a lesbians vagina, better hope we dont come your way
put a "hole in one" nigga, this aint golf but you wont live to see the next day
aight.. no punch...but decent flow...

nigga claim he go "hard", but its only when he sees other dudes
fucking wit me?..shit, this niggga was "made to be broken" like rules
been said and flip many times but oookay i guess...

well lets see what the thing i have a problem with...
in the rules it says a 20-30 line battle so i was figuering you'll have more but you didnt? did u run out of thing to say? no more heat? what happen fam??
well u'r punches was weak and they wasnt creative
you flow was decent but thats about it..
no wordplay no meta's noting else to say about ya verse just that it seems u didnt try or if u did then it seems like u'r not elevating come on I KNOW YOU CAN do better then that....
this was a disapointment really and sad to see u actully drop this... hope u change and get on your a-game or grind it out in the cyphers for a min.... 3 outta 10

next

im back to rip get strapped to attack on a rampage....
this ghost figure wanna battle so im quick to engage.....
ok...
lyrically i'll leave your writtens "pissed on"....
.....like the seat of a public toilet kid.....
decent...

u could "bench press weight and practice boxing"....
....but like "missles missing targets"....
.....your "punches" still wouldn't "strike a confirmed hit".....
decent.. but the flow a bit off...

i'll burn this bitch put in work i can see weak spots through all your text...
....cause the shit u make is made "fragile and thin"....
......like " cracking windows with 30% strength of a fist"......
decent punch again but ya flow is a bit off and a bit strech...

but since he only went 8m lines i only judge 8 of your lines...
your structure is aight but could be better....
you flow on this was was aight but i've seen better....
your punches was decent and a bit creative but again i've seen better....

not saying your verse was wack or weak but your strcture could be better and then flow on this could of been to...
punches was decent...
7 outta 10..

k-m won this hands down...
its a good thing i aint read the rest could i bet it would of been worst for ghost....

GHOST: keep writting and drop in the cypher section in the crew fourm or the cypher fourm u'll elevate soon enough....