ehhh im not feelin this wiley....this was more like a small keystyle than the concept u were trying to bring.....u needed to get more descriptive on why your Gods Gift to the world........well better yet stay on subject.....no hate though just how i see it....keep workin on your writtens man.....
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=243760
check out my newest piece called Betrayal....^^^^^^
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