Yeah dude this was real nice.
But honest the flow was hard to read at time man.
The emotion had potential but you didnt grow on it that much.
The imagery was nice and straightforward
so goof peice keep writing man,

__________________
War|Pestilence|
Death|Famine|

|Atrocious|
|Corruptive|Depraved|
|Heinous|Malevolent|Sinister|

That's pretty fucking evil to me.....