Thread: SKAAL vs ransum
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Old 08-22-07, 11:26 PM   #9
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This was feedback posted for Ransum

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This bitch think hes raw an uncut....til he got circumsized...
cuz ya battles are good 'around here'... like u battling circus-guys...

^^^^^ 4/10 naw the circumsized punch doesn't go together...with raw and uncut....to different meanings ....

the "battling circus guys" punch could be worked on 6/10


There ain't no way skaal verse is efficient...
each one of my punches i'll make u roll over like cingular minutes...

^^^^^^^^ nice lol 8/10

ya only retaliation is im 'ducking and u'r-gay'...
But battleing u is a waste of my 'fuckin time' like foreplay...

^^^^^ ehhhh could be worked on 6/10

i'll twist ya head back an smack it forward.. to take ya hype- away...
why u trying to warm up to get served... like a microwave...

^^^^^^decent 7/10
none of u'r metaphors are bangin' they back-fire...
i'ma jack this nigga up... like i'm changin a flat tire...

^^^^^^another decent punch 7/10
ya sound aint hot... there more like local trash...
So i'ma snap skaal in two like quick countdowns for a photograph...

the "sound aint hot" punch and "local trash" dont go together 4/10

but the "photograph punch" was nice 8/10

these dude' i'll get fuckin crucified to bones next...
cuz this fruit is 'nuttin' to my lines like 'phone sex'...

^^^^^^ehhhh wasn't enough for a punch 5/10
MOTHER FUCKAH....

overall decent verse ive seen better from u though especially with the punches....


next!!!!......



i'm here!, i'm bout to hold ransum for ransome
and give hiim sixty shots once i brandish tha handgun

^^^^^^^^the "ransum for ransome" line is played....4/10

the "brandish tha handgun" not bad 6/10

damn son, braggin 10 wins that's alot to you?
pm'd ya voters dick rydin like a prostitute

^^^^^no that punch was to simple 5/10

you 'perfect health' my 'sick scripts are a drop~of~flu'

^^^^^^^^ haha nice 8.5/10
you couldn't make a punchline 'stick with a box~of~glue'

^^^^^this punch could be worked on 6.5/10

melt ya wig like i'm burnin down a manequin
uzi up ya kness to garauntee you'll never stand again

^^^^^^ ehhhhhh nothin in it really 6/10
ran start panicin reload.. cock.. blam again
commit genocide on ya tribe like we africans

^^^^^^decent 7/10
he can't be trusted like sneaky~back~stabbin~friends
you used to be great like a old beat~and~battered~benz

^^^^^^ nice liked how u used the multis here 8/10

i'm highly flammable a wild caged animal
my rage'll rip him open then i'll feed him to the cannibals

^^^^^^not really anything its just there lol 6/10

my vice grip is mandibleya clout more like anti-pull
i'll squeeze tha steamer give you wings like a red bull

^^^^^played on the red bull line 5/10


overall u went up and down Skaal....i think that "perfect health" line was your best punch it was more creative than the others....more of your lines should of been like that one....the rest didn't seem u were trying.....if i was to vote id say Ransum got this cause of being more consistent with punches....i say yall have another battle though cause ive seen better from both of u....~1~ yall stay up
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